Friday, February 29, 2008

Strange Pets By: Anne Marie

Do you like dogs? My dog is named Poopsy Doo. If you come to my house, my dog will jump on you. If you sit on my couch, he will lick you. You will not like his slobbery kisses. When I put my food on the floor, he eats it. His favorite foods are green beans, mashed potatoes, and turkey. While he is eating, he doesn't like to share. He is so beautiful. My other dog is Buggy Dee. When you tell her to sit, she sits almost like a human. My family calls that "sitting pretty." If you try to steal her dog bone, she will growl at you. One day, she bit my mom's hand. When Buggy gets bored, she starts chewing on blankets. But I think she is a very wonderful dog. Also, I have a cat. Her name is Patches. She is very kind. She sleeps a lot, but she will not sleep on the floor. When it is nighttime, she comes on my bed and cuddles with me. She also kills mice, but I don't like that because she puts the mice in front of the door. I have another cat, and his name is Peachy. He is much meaner than Patches. He also bites very hard and Patches doesn't. If you try to rub him, he will scratch you. When anybody comes near, he will hiss. I wouldn't come near him for a long time. Now I think they all are delightful.

8 comments:

fairviewsine said...

Anne Marie,
You did a wonderful job on your story. Keep up the good work. I am very proud of you. Love, mom.

Anonymous said...

Hello Anne Marie,
We used to have a cat too and he would bring us mice. Someone told me they bring mice to you because they love you and want to give you a gift. I enjoyed hearing about your animals.

Anonymous said...

We enjoyed your wonderful story.
We like animals too. You have quite a manangerie!

Anonymous said...

Anne Marie,

I feel like I actually visited your house after reading your story. I have a dog that sleeps with me too at the bottom of my bed and when my feet accidentally touch him while I am sleeping he trys to bite me. Your story was very descriptive. Good job using lots of words that describe your pets! Mrs. Moore, Counselor

Anonymous said...

Anne Marie, what a great story! You have quite a houseful of pets. I loved reading about your dogs and cats. You gave great descriptions, and I loved your word "delightful."

Mrs. Gouzd said...

Hi Ann Marie!
Yes, I do like dogs!Your "Poopsy Doo" sounds a lot like my "Fitch". Fitch is very friendly and likes to give kisses. And my "Sadie" is like your "Buggy Dee" because she too will "sit pretty".
Your descriptions really helped me to compare our pets. And your introduction is what caught my atention! - Good Job!

Anonymous said...

hi exelent story

Anonymous said...

We loved your story. We thought the names were great. You are a very good writer. We could see what you were saying. Some us would like to meet your mean cat.

Mrs. Arthur's Class