Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Going to Tennessee By: Deloris
A great place to go is Tennessee. It takes a long time. My mom and I were getting ready to go to Tennessee. First, we got clothes to take. Then, we got some food. Finally, we got in the car. On the way there, I saw lots of beautiful things. We went through Kentucky to get to Tennesee. We saw people going fishing, coal mines, and a small city. When we got to Tennessee, we had to find a place to stay. Went went to a hotel room and unpacked our things. Then we went shopping for more clothes. It is so exciting in Tennesee. I met lots of new people. I also went to school in Tennessee and made lots of new friends. I had fun in school. Then it was time to go home.
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2 comments:
Deloris,
I've been to Tennessee a few times and it is a beautiful place to visit. Keep on writing!
Sincerely,
Mrs. Swiger
5th Grade Teacher
Deloris, I enjoyed reading your story, and I like how you described your trip. I didn't know that you went to school in Tennessee for awhile! It sounds like a great place to visit.
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